Ian Livingstone
Reviewed by Mark Lain
After 20
straight re-issues of material we already had, Wizard Books finally bit the
bullet and offered FF fans a new book. With “Brand New Adventure” proudly emblazoned
across the cover, when this appeared in 2005 it was an exciting release - the first
new FF book since the original series’ swansong #59 Curse Of The Mummy came out 10 years earlier. Even more importantly,
this was not a “Steve Jackson and Ian Livingstone Present” effort, but was
written by series co-creator (and my personal favourite FF author) Ian
Livingstone, had a great cover image of a smoking dragon’s face in close-up,
and impressive-looking internal art by the always good Martin McKenna. So this
promised a lot at first glance. I eagerly took a copy from the shelf in
Waterstone’s, took it to the cashier, handed over my hard-earned, and darted
home to play this wonderful-looking book. I played it. I closed it. I put it on
my FF shelf and I tried to forget about it.
This adventure
is a very traditional dungeon trawl in the style of the very earliest FFs and it
must have come across as a retrograde step when it appeared as the 21st
in the first Wizard series, given the sheer variety of adventures that had
preceded it. The original series developed progressively, with the more
involved and idea-stretching books coming further into the series. As the
Wizard re-issues started with most of Steve and Ian’s books many of the more “out
there” ideas had already been seen with books like House Of Hell, Creature Of Havoc, Armies Of Death, Legend Of Zagor, and
Appointment With FEAR all already available.
There is nothing wrong with old-school dungeons, but this book actually manages
to be derivative of its own series, makes the FF concept seem genuinely tired,
and reads like all the outtakes and alternate takes from The Warlock Of Firetop Mountain and Deathtrap Dungeon have been swept-up off the cutting room floor,
stuck together, and bound up inside a cover with the title written on it. TWOFM is seminal in that it was the
first FF ever and did something never really seen before up to that point. Deathtrap Dungeon is probably the most inventive,
varied and exciting dungeon ever created in FF. EOTD is the FF series’ answer to cheap exploitation movies like Peter
Sellers’ Trail/Curse Of The Pink Panther
or Bruce Lee’s Game Of Death where
every last inch of available footage was chucked together with some filler
scenes to attempt to create something new that was fooling no-one with any
sense of irony or taste. There are actually several moments lifted directly
from TWOFM and Deathtrap Dungeon including (spiked) pitfall traps, seats that
give you energy, helmets made of different metals that you can pick from to
wear, rooms that speak to you, an inexplicably-located shop, numbered keys...
the list goes on.
The actual
plot is as ridiculous and far-fetched as any of the more illogical FF plots
are. You are in a pub in Fang (just before the annual Trial Of Champions) where
you meet Henry Delacor who tells you about a dungeon under Darkwood Forest that
contains a very valuable gold dragon with two emeralds for eyes. The emeralds
are hidden somewhere in the dungeon and trying to take the dragon minus its eyes
will kill you. He has already tried to find it, but, as he found only one
emerald eye, he couldn’t remove it safely. He challenges you to take his
emerald, find the second one, retrieve the gold dragon, and bring it back to
him to sell and divide the spoils between you (he somehow knows it’s worth the rather
randomly precise figure of 335,000 gold pieces – does he already have a buyer
then?) However, there’s a catch. To make sure you don’t rip him off and steal
the lot he forces you to drink a slow-acting poison so that you have to return
to him to get the antidote. Is this not the most biased insurance policy ever?
Surely any hardened adventurer would just nick the emerald and go it alone and
the apparent stupidity of the character you play here is quite awe-inspiring.
There then follows a name-checking trek to Darkwood where you note Firetop
Mountain and Stonebridge en route to a woodcutter’s hut deep in Darkwood that
you presumably never seemed to notice when you played The Forest Of Doom. What follows is a frankly tedious and dated
meander up various largely featureless corridors, being offered the chance to
open different kinds of door (some on the left, some on the right, just to add
a bit of totally unexciting variety), open some chests, or turn left or right
at various junctions. Fascinating stuff (not.)
It quickly
becomes apparent that you are going to spend a lot of time writing items down
that you have found and the amount of stuff you end up carrying around with you
is genuinely ludicrous. Of course, as this is an Ian Livingstone book, the
shopping list of items you need to succeed is quite lengthy, but I did end up
wondering how you still manage to fit a huge gold dragon in your backpack at
the end. Do you just dump everything else once you’ve found the main thing you’re
looking for? To be honest, there’s no point in even picking half of it up as it
often never seems to have a purpose.
Unusually,
especially for IL, this book is not particularly difficult once you’ve found
the correct route. Even more unusually, there is more than one way through the
dungeon as long as you find the main parts as you go. Additionally, it is very
easy to bluff your way through two key moments rendering the main challenges of
the game meaningless. Firstly, to avoid being crushed by a moving wall shortly
before you find the second emerald you need to recite the Hole In The Wall
Spell. If you select “Yes” to the question of whether you know it, the book
gives you a choice of three lines to pick from, giving you a one in three
chance of just guessing irrespective of whether you have genuinely found the
spell or not. It would be more normal for a numerical cheat-proof solution to be
applied here. Secondly, to open the door to the gold dragon room you need to
remove five weapons from the wall in the correct order. Get any one wrong and
you are dead. To enable you to do this, the wall also has five metal doors
behind which are five clues telling you the order to pull the weapons out. The
little doors open with matching metal keys (gold, silver, bronze, etc) that are
hidden around the dungeon. This time each key does have a numerical reference,
but you only need a maximum of four to win given that a process of elimination will
tell you what info is being the fifth. Sadly, this is handled very badly as
success is not dependant on having any keys at all, given that you can simply
guess the order. Correctly guessing the first four in a row is undeniably tough
and requires plenty of luck, but it is always possible.
It is no real
surprise that the usual lie about being able to win through regardless of your
stats applies here and only characters with mega-high stats have any real hope,
if only because there are many Skill and Luck tests, although only a small
number are potentially fatal if you fail (in fact, for IL, there are comparatively few instant deaths full
stop.) There are lots of Stamina penalties along the way, but by far the
toughest part (and probably the only really hard part as even the Hell Demon
can be simply run away from, whether you have a kris knife or not) of this book
comes with two combats that you cannot avoid if you want to win: a Sk 12
Gigantus that does you 4 Stamina points of damage each time it hits you, and a
Sk 10 Doppelganger that you have to fight with a -2 Attack Strength penalty. It
is possible that you can find yourself in a third (even harder) combat if
either you don’t have the elven boots or you fail a Luck test due to having a
clumsy sidekick when you are trying to sneak past a Black Dragon that, if
awakened, has Sk 14 St 18 leaving you pretty much toast by that point. An
unusual (for IL) balance exists here though as there are also ample ways of
increasing your Stamina by drinking various potions that you find along the way
(which is made a little trickier as there are also several poisons to catch you
out), plus you start out with 10 Provisions. There are similarly several
Skill-boosting discoveries including one that awards +1 Skill so early on that
you can’t possibly have lost any Skill yet. Are we in that case supposed to
ignore the rule that says you cannot exceed your Initial Skill? Either way, something
has gone wrong in the planning, which is a bit shoddy – badly play-tested FFs
are always frustrating and whilst this is a minor oversight compared to books that
are literally rendered impossible due to bad editing (#58 Revenge Of The Vampire probably being the worst culprit), it is
still irritating.
Ian Livingstone
often cannot resist giving us a NPC to travel with (usually regardless of
whether we want them or not) and this adventure is no different in that respect
when you discover the Dwarf called Littlebig (who is later revealed
unsurprisingly to be related to Bigleg from The
Forest Of Doom.) It is possible to go past the room where Littlebig is
being held prisoner but if you do the book makes you turn around and go back to
get him in another example of FF making decisions for YOU when YOU are
supposedly in the driving seat. Unlike almost all other NPCs, Littlebig does
not immediately die, run away, or try to murder you for no apparent reason and Littlebig
will always survive for as long as you do. He is actually quite useful as he
can share combats with you, meaning some tougher foes can take double damage
where you only get hit once (and Littlebig is seemingly impervious to damage), plus
he can read dwarven runes and there are lots scattered about later in the
adventure that can help you find the safe route, but he also suffers from verbal
diarrhoea (which does at least liven things up), is ridiculously cheerful, and
is annoyingly clumsy so can get you into trouble here and there. He is also a
key plot driver as he was also searching for the emeralds and the gold dragon
and now wants revenge on his captor (someone called Sharcle.) Once you’ve found
the dragon and taken it, there is an actually quite neat plot twist (if you
aren’t bored rigid by the tedious drudgery of the dungeon by this time) where
Sharcle turns out to be Henry Delacor who turns out to be a thief and tries to
rip you off so you kill him. This leaves you with the slight problem of having
no poison antidote so you head for Stonebridge where Ian Livingstone’s
favourite (and ever-annoying) wizard Yaztromo tells you that you never were
poisoned and it was all a big scam to get you to do all the hard work. This is
a nice twist that ties the whole storyline together, but you really won’t care
by this time.
Within the
context of the FF cannon, there are many links to other books in the series: Darkwood
Forest, Fang, Bigleg, Yaztromo, Stonebridge, Firetop Mountain, plus if you
choose to search the hut right at the start before descending into the dungeon
below you find an axehead with something strange inscribed into it. Could this
be a link to the Stonebridge dwarfs’ weapon you need to find in The Forest Of Doom? As it serves no
purpose at all in EOTD it can only be
some sort of linking feature within the series. Whilst inter-relation between
entries into the series is a feature I always like to see, there are so many
here that it seems like a desperate attempt to validate this book’s relevance
to the cannon as a whole. Plus, I still fail to understand why the hut and its
vast underground dungeon aren’t found in The
Forest Of Doom. Has it been subsequently built? Also, given the sheer amount
of things that seem to live down there, the presence of a shop, various rooms with
complexities such as artworks or creatures working on weapons etc it seems that
this dungeon is a deliberate creation intended as a challenge in the same vein
as the Trial Of Champions or Shaggradd’s Hives Of Peril. The design of the
dungeon is certainly no accident and this is where the concept becomes a)
totally illogical and b) appears to exist for the sake of writing another FF
book.
The awkward
nature of this dungeon’s existence for existence’s sake could be tied back to
the adventure’s origin which brings us to another major issue here – this is NOT
a brand new adventure. Yes, in this format it might be new and, yes, it had not
been issued as a FF book, but the dungeon design and plot itself (albeit in
reduced form) originally appeared in Ian Livingstone’s RPG primer Dicing With Dragons published pre-FF in
1982 as the first adventure scenario for Ian’s planned Fantasy Quest system that would be adapted and morph into FF once
he merged it with Steve Jackson’s ideas. The art in the original was by early
FF artist Russ Nicholson (a favourite of mine whose work really seems to
epitomise FF as it started so early in the series) and this was clearly the
blueprint for Martin McKenna’s art in the FF version – in some case he has very
closely “adapted” Nicholson’s work, but, that said, I do think McKenna’s work
in EOTD is very effective, being
well-drawn and very complete in its look and certainly far better than the
adventure itself. The cover is equally good and gives nothing away about the
plot, leading you to think the dragon is a physical creature which adds some
intrigue (although any interest quickly fades when you start playing!)
Unfortunately,
the tedious slog through the fairly unexciting dungeon and the stupid plot
premise are not the only areas where this falls flat as the encounters
themselves are uninteresting and hardly anything new is offered up. When you
consider that this was the 60th “new” FF book to be published, you’d
have thought that IL could have come up with some interesting and unique
encounters given what some of the later books had brought to the table. On a
positive, I really like the Gigantus (and McKenna’s illustration really hits
its imposing and horrific appearance home), but most of the creatures are
bog-standard Orcs, Ghouls, Zombies, a Vampire, a Gremlin, Spiders, some Skeletons,
a Troll, an Ogre, etc etc yawn yawn. There is a fairly complex show-down with a
Snake Witch that is probably the only well fleshed-out and thought-provoking encounter
you ever have here, but for the most part the creatures you meet are either
very basic or there’s just no rational explanation for why they are there. Why
would something as “sophisticated” as a Vampire or a Hell Demon be dossing
around in an underground tunnel network? In many cases getting away from
encounters is not difficult (bar the two tough and unavoidable ones mentioned
earlier) and the worst offering by far is described simply as an Evil Wizard.
He does mention his name at one point, but he’s mostly referred to (the combat
sections included) as “Evil Wizard.” For someone like Ian Livingstone who has
demonstrated great imagination many times in the past, this is a frankly desperate
state of affairs.
This
adventure’s dated and dull design overshadows that fact that, as always,
Livingstone’s writing is actually very vivid and descriptive and the atmosphere
is well created here. Sadly, this also works against it as too much information
can reveal the failings and that is certainly the case here. The descriptions
make it all too abundantly clear just how unoriginal and empty this adventure
is.
I doubt many
people will play this more than once or twice as there is so little of interest
to encourage repeat playing. The fact that it is not linear could add some re-playability,
but there is little here to fire the imagination in what is simply one of the
most boring FF books ever. It makes no sense, offers nothing new (especially
coming so late in the series), and is well below the standard we expect from
Ian Livingstone. The most interesting thing about this book is that it has a rather random total of 407 paragraphs (and 400 is still the victory one.)
Depressing. Let us never talk of this again.